”When he was turned over, his eyeballs started upward in amazement and horror, his was locked torn wide: his trousers soaked with blood, were torn open, and exposed to the cold, white air of morning the thick hairs of his groin, mattered together, black and rust red, and the wound that seemed to be throbbing still”.
The passage achieve realism through the use of
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details
- simple words
- the long sentence
- the past tense
- punctuation.